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Ok the review is till chapter 33.Writing quality -5story development- 4 ( Till now, there's no specific storyline and the MC just wants to become strong so that he isn't being played under fate and how powerless he was to change his condition prior his transmigration.The MC doesn't gets much pumped or angry after the typical engagement break plot. So far, the plot is progressing but there's no definite or specific storyline which alignes with MCs goal.      That maybe because only 33 chapters has been released.-Not much clichés and regular tropes, if there are, they barely go beyond one chapter.Character design-4 ( MC only wills to not be a pawn where he can't control anything.So far, being an orphan prior the transmigration, he had to work to feed himself making him quite headstrong and look on the poor side of the earth.Now that hes in a cultivation world, he can gauge what needs to be done when and how accordingly.He hasn't shown much toxic behavior except a typical poison MC tongue.   Update stability -5 ( The more the better but the novel is in it's infant stage so only authors know when and how much to post. So far, decent pace.World background- 4 ( So far, there's not much description on world background except the 'cultivation world' is entirely in a different space, meaning, there's a barrier between the commoner world and cultivation world. The barrier is on an high altitude where one can't reach it until they can fly and enter it.Besides that, there's only introduction on one sect which makes it hard to gauge how wide the world is. Definitely larger than our earth though.  Mc has a golden finger which he himself can't figure out it's origin but it's pretty much OP but it works depending on MCs cultivation level.I have read the mainstream Chinese novels that are on novel updates and ********** and I have big hopes for this novel. I haven't done a review before but loved the novel and couldn't refrain from doing it.                                            
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I think the author should invest time to improve Itachi's character. I mean,  like Itachi is cool in the sense that his a character in the naruto series with a major sad story but can endure, wait no, can sacrifice everything just to protect his brother even if it means his own happiness. I admire him for his traits that makes him so great (this is just my opinion) but then I still congratulate author for writhing an amazing story. It's not the best but this story is still one of the best. You don't read an awesome Itachi reincarnate fanfic everyday.  ??✨???
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a trash story out of a trash human?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️
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smh you shouldn't went premium you need to fix up your story and get better reviews in the comments section before making people have to pay to read you already have one story on that you should have used this one to grow that's all I had to say I saw improvement in the last couple chapters but now i wont know if your going to improve anymore
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review is here a.......................
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"What part of 'everything you need' did you not get? Although, some spare clothing might do you good."
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[What do you mean why?]
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*crack* Islam my hand on the table where it is almost broken since it is made of glass.
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She glanced over to the old lady and handed in a peculiar look. The lady returned it back and spoke out.
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Hoste reçoit 2000ryos
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"Thank y-" "We are here, Hobi" hoseok was cut offed by his two hyungs entering the room, one had a big smile which was Jin and the other one was having an emotionless face but when his eyes met mine it turned into a smirk. I turned to Hoseok asking if I can go with my face expressions.

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