SIGH She immediately gets dominated by, and becomes subservient to a man like 3 chapters in. I know light novels and Asian society as a whole are hyper misogynistic but fuck, you can't have the MAIN CHARACTER be dominant? She's supposed to be 28/29 years old but she's blushing and shying away after a kiss, allowing a slave to take ALL of her money and the checkbook out of her hand. Cause you know, a woman should be all "Oh no I can't possibly engage in sexual activity" while being a passive victim subjected to whatever advances are placed on her but don't worry she's into it.
Just make a normal human. It's not hard the world is full of em.