Immortal's Lament [Dropped] - Reviews

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So everyone gets system except the protagonist, it seems interesting but these test readings never go beyond 10 chapters, right?~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

This is good story and has good pace ....I read it's original and can only say that the is worth the read .( the book is complete?) with the  only downside being the rushed ending with confused explaination thus feel disheartened in the end but nonetheless a good book.

If theres one thing this author does right its building up a rhetoric with the characters, you actually care  and enjoy reading about all of them and their conversations with the MC.The downside to this is the author sometimes drags on arcs or plot points for far too long, at least in most readers opinions and from my personal viewpoint. The author seriously drags on the MCs torture/mansion for quite a few chapters, but in exchange it awards us with the feelings of actually  caring about the dynamics with Juno, Dinah, Anna, and others. For example we understand why Juno and the MC hate each other to their cores, and the narrative does a very good job reminding us, without being obnoxious. TLDR I would say this story is very mediocre, the one redeeming feature is the character dynamics and development. I hope Author finishes this story without a rushed ending and goes on to make an even better one.**. this story might be harem however every girl except one (stephanie) hates the MC so I cant actually say its harem, at least not for the first 200 chapters. There is quite a few women around the MC, and they might fall in love with him later in the story and/or gradually.

Interesting take on the whole being reborn in the past and making use of future knowledge Like the whole business empire thingas well as the show biz partsHope u don’t dropPls update more ?????

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It read "I've tried reaching you Wei. Please let me explain to you everything. Tomorrow by 11am @ the garden park"

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So he waits at her I mean they wait at her, after 20 minutes Ashley came and greet them.

"What are you on about? I didn't say anything!"Jake protested.

"I-I think there was a hotdog cart a couple blocks that way" the man motioned with his head.

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