I love those books that feel like they started in the middle of the book and have no end. For a few seconds we wonder if the author is going to use flashback or give clues to guess the past. Then we read a few pages and we know there will be no end.
This started Okay. but downgraded quite quickly. The comedy is very repetative and cringey. Then story just became shit after the whole Ore appraisal where like half of the story upto now take place. Then it nose dived again when Mc started to introduce real world things like gun, granade and bombs into the world.
I just had a bad feeling that the characters developed for this will be a issueThe fact I see a villian system means this MC is a villian at the get go…
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oh man....this is not as good as i thought! the World Background is awesome but the rest sucks! 140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!140!
An intriguing plot line among the plenty of system novels on this platform. MC character is deigned nicely by the author- San. The world is created where criminals are living a good life which is in itself makes it very different from the other stories on the platform. Wanna see how Taro will become a godfather when his skills are nil.All the best for Spirity☺️
good story !!! At the begining the MC is ruthless...I LIKE IT ....may the author can keep up with the story and won't change this side of the MC . goog luck and keep working !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The novel's too slow-paced, the world-building is too messy, and the is non-existent. Not to mention, the first 20 chaps are all just filler. Lastly, the author seems to enjoy abusing the mc a little too much.
Beautiful beautiful beautiful beautiful beautiful beautiful beautiful beautiful beautiful beautiful. Where has this beeen all my life. The humor is great. Its a very mature book, yet it feels real and thats whats so great about. It doesnt feel serious at all like it usually would but at the same time it can be. Read for yourself to find out more!
