Immersion - Reviews

Meh, it’s kind of annoying how the story is so trim. She’s just so blasé and flakey about everything. There’s no build up, no back stories, a cliche plot with supporting story. It really bothers me she sets no boundaries and has vague reactions. Not realistic.

Good story to read. I red all available chapters on one sitting. There are some spelling and grammar error at first but at later chapters it became almost nonexistent. Keep up the good work. Hope you write more chapters. :)

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New story with lots mystery really eagerly waiting for new chapters updates i really like your writings in your both the novels eager wanted to read further story please do your best and update asap❤❤

The story is really nice and both ML & FL are really very strong character who are fighting there battles very strongly against all their enemies .i love reading it .Awaiting more chapters from the authorKeep up the good workAll the best

352 chapters, completed in raws, the last chapter was just an outline, very abrupt ending. it was good until it ended.

"Awww. You're so adorable!" I imagine her saying this with a gorgeous smile.

Fury of the Sands: Nasus unleashes a mighty sandstorm that batters nearby enemies. While the storm rages, he gains increased Health, Attack Range, damages nearby enemies, has a reduced cooldown on Siphoning Strike, and gains bonus Armor and Magic Resistance for the duration.

"Could you quit staring, I'm not into old ladies," Jack said as he rubbed a finger under his nose as pretended to be flattered by her stares.

Who the fuck is this guy?