Illusion of Fate - Reviews

Promising synopsis,But very, VERY poor execution. It's a shame.Reads like a significantly worse version of losing money to be a Tycoon.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Obligatory self-review from the author! Giving myself such a low number, just to make the rest of the score seem more realistic :D Will change that once genuine reviews will start appearing here.For the story:If you are naive kid, then you shouldn't read books involving ***** themes like smut, gore or psychological warfare. As such, begone. I already turned too many people on the bad path with my other novels. Warnings:There will be smut in this novel. Not just mindless **** that you can google and get with sound and video attached, but a smut that will be caused by the story and that will serve the story.At times, there are time-jumps between chapters. Unless the story is directly continued as if there was no chapter-split at all, then suddenly a random part of the story appearing is the result of the time-skip.This novel is the absolute pinaccle of what I can write right now. While the chapters in general will be mostly lighthearted, the same cannot be said about the true plot of the story.Thanks for supporting me and I hope you will like this novel at least as much as I love to write it!(For curious, yeah. This is an indirect continuation of the other "While others cultivate,..." of mine)

This Novel is quite good and interesting.Among recent Trial this is one of best.I hope this get pick..it is worth your time and money.Most Important this Novel have cats..and that Cat is Halo

Response to ya requestThis novel is actually pretty good, if you enjoy reading op cultivation novel I would recommemd you read it.  My main concern for this novel is its update stability. I hope ya won’t be like other Original authors who update the novel but isnt about the story but note or whatever. Its really annoying when that happens and get your hope shatter into pieces

I have said this a lot but will say this again, I love the plot, and I cant wait to see how the story plays out. < 3                                                           

They were the ones who ruled everything from the shadows. They were the ones that poisoned her parents. They were the ones who had kept her in a prison. They were the ones who had tried to kill her every day but failed. They were the Council.

She knows that Seyoo will stay in one of the facility of the orphanage as a help lady while she attended her therapy for her psychological problem and make her ready to be functional again in her future endeavor.

I blushed instantly.

"Show me my status" said Shawn curious to see his status after a month of hard training or, well, three days.

Although the comparison of their forces was far from Hitler's army, namely 1:10. Victory is still a mystery because at that time, the entire country was destroyed. "

I love the story so far. I don't read much on this platform but this work is one whose updates I look forward to daily. Continue to update regularly and develop the story as you are doing and it will be a great work!

It deserve 5 star not because Is a perfect. Sorry, altough It Is a very good One, but because the author had the audacity and the auto-critics abilities to know that he could do Better by rewriting his novel in something much more refined.you sir, deserve only compliments.please keep It up