If You Do [GOT7 Fanfiction] - Reviews

Seems to be interesting. I would love to read further. Author, updates please.

Waste of time. Another result of production line... Zero creativity. MC is moron. Don't read it if you want to use at least one of your brain cells.

Exp!! It's a good novel aswell!! ?                                                                                                                                                   

I remember reading this exact novel somewere on webnovel a long time ago but it was dropped. It's a solid novel worth reading to new readers who enjoy MC who riencarnated back to the 19s with knowledge of the future and using that knowledge to becoming rich. The decisions the MC takes are logical and precise, the story is well structured and the grammar is great, there are a few grammatical errors but are not that noticeable.My only concern is if the Author will continue the novel from were it was dropped as it was a fantastic novel in my opinion or will he stop were the last Author dropped it.

loving the work. ???????I hope author can explain more about the what type of snake Hiro is...and maybe about his past? anyway keep up the amazing work ??

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

First thing first..  Give you a 5* rating cos I really enjoy this novel..  Pros : Story is Good..  Has lot of potential. Mc cheat and path to power seems interesting and it got me hooked right from the beginning.. Good job author. Pros : * sigh * Even though I got so hooked up n immersed in the story I can't help but feel irritated by the simple mistakes?? Of the translator or the Author.  For f sake..  Please.. Even if ur not that good in grammar at least write the spellings right..  Too many  wrong spellings n misplaced words..  To point out a few..  Every time we saw Mc status update we see "Mentle" power that should be "Mental" power * Hmmm * Pls at least fix this..  The spellings n grammar mistakes are an eyesore for this unpolished Novel that has a lot of potential to rise up..  Pls fix.. Asap.** : M rooting for you Author to make this story better than it already is..'

Another, more sturdy looking man in the line rushed forward and met the man with the demonic mask head-on, receiving a strike which he blocked before they began their own duel. Their strengths were evenly matched and their fighting styles were more brutish than the carefully honed skills and agility the person in the cloak practiced.

"I'm sorry…" I whispered.

dantel.          *

Fixing his attention back to the Gaster platoon, Michael ordered. "Lead Zar's men to the abandoned houses, they are allies so make them feel welcome, tomorrow they will depart so send them food tonight as well."

nice book,one of the author good book to read.