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If I Chose You Instead
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I Love it's not a big deal but I don't have ah phone again and I hope you have a great day and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone again and I will be there at the same place as last time I don't recommend it to the Moon by the way I don't have to go out of town for my bro ? the doo doo ?????? of the same time I don't have ah phone
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An okay story. Irks me that all the chapters that I've read before are suddenly locked and I have to use my points up just to re-read whatever I can't remember. Absolute pain in the arse.
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Author has a good grasp of storytelling and it was enjoyable to read through. There were hardly any grammatical errors, and if there were, they did not deter readers from the experience. This is an interesting story with a breath of fresh air. I also immensely enjoyed the author's way of captivating the readers with rich imagery and painting the world in our minds. But most of all. The banter. Oh my god, the banter is probably my favourite part. Some writers can write natural dialogue and some struggle with it - but this author is great at writing dialogue.
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~~~~~READ BUT BEWARE OF~~~~~Nice novel so far ( around chapter 45 ) but i see a pattern at the moment from chapter 30 to 45ish is basically the same chapter just in another order.1. Mc is streaming2. 20ish comments from people watching stream3. Mc walks 500 miles at evening or morning4. 1 or 2 sidecharacter background info sentences5. 1 or 2 story progress sentencesThis novel is written in a great way but will be a pain to your stone collection later on.At the moment i dont see myself reading it when it gets premium and i need to "pay" 12 stones for one chapter were basically is no content but some random "comments" from some none important people of the imaginery stream.
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Well it have some promise but too many people act stupid or unreasonably here because author don't want to work hard on writing.Still the concept have some promise.
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A 3.6, maybe a shaky 3.8 from me.A farming system. Does that mean he farms mystical crops, does smart trading and uses them to upgrade his status, fame and power? Nope, it's so that he gains an easy, no thinking ability that does everything and more.The System: A farming system that literally grows everything as long as 'fertilizer' is added. Including exploding peas, eye sight enhancing carrots (carrots don't actually improve eye sight) and soul enhancing cucumbers and the bust increasing corn(as of chapter 59).The characters: There was so much potential here. But with the transmigrated somewhat clichèdly perverted MC, the slapstick mindreader that was so very disappointingly introduced and the woman who drank so much 'corn juice' that her bust size increased to H cup.The story: Again, this was a missed opportunity. The people in power have known about the revitalization of Qi and have been preparing for it. A transmigrated MC with an op farm system, a government organisation that seeks to maintain order in the country and it's destructive counterpart that seeks to destroy it. This, if done right, could've been a good action novel but it relies so heavily on sexual innuendos (thick juicy corn, a blushing easily distracted mindreader that keeps screaming pervert and such) that it just ruins that flow.
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Interesting story the plot is very good, the protagonist's personality is amazing, harem I don't know if there will be a heroine or will appear later on I hope so
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Very Boring and to much wasted on a basic Little  sister that likes to act likes MC maid......
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Hello, the recently self-hired editor here.I found this novel accidentally on Web, and I hit gold here. I haven't read Author's POV much, that's why this novel is quite fresh for me. I was keeping up with the novel in 1st volume but the novel itself carried me in the next volume. The humor, grammar and author's flow of writing improved by a large margin. The world spread is also getting wider and its getting exciting.But many people's minds were stuck on the 'GRAMMAR'. Honestly, mine too. And then I thought, why not try it myself? I've never done this, but it's fun.Author's grammar is improving and I might be unemployed soon.Jokes aside, I strongly recommend all of you this novel as it is filled with well written action and well paced events within. Read "The Extra's Survival".
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It's a good story and love it so far....give it a try once??????..........???????...............??????????..............????????
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Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.
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raw link pls. .........????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

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