This story is intriguing.Review Proper.Writing Quality. It's a smooth read with all the narratives being clear and concise. Though there are a few g-errors here and there but nothing could be fixed by a little proofreading.Stability of Updates. Stable so far.Story Development. Fast-paced yet well-explained. It flows smoothly and it made one dive into the story as they continue to read.Character Design. The characters felt real especially the MC, Long Chen. Even the supporting characters' stories were written well and you could sympathize to them rarely well too.World Background. Since this is a cultivation story, from the items to the way of cultivation, everything is described neatly so far. Overall if you're a fan of Cultivation Story, give this story a try and you would surely like it.