I Don't Want To Be A Necromancer! - Reviews

.........................This Novel is Scam?

Honestly I really enjoyed this book sad that it didn't get picked to get translated i apparently need more characters to post this review hi

Boring wish fulfilment novel. Cant really get into it. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Writing quality is good with almost no mistakes. But the story development is a bit dull for me. On the other hand the characters and fight scene are awesome. Maybe you will be improving the story more in the future or it has something up in the sleeves. But for now we can only wait for more chapters.

Hi there! Thank you for even making it this far! This is my attempt at a holistic breakdown of this work, but please keep in mind that it is my first time writing a story of this genre. TLDR: Not a typical OP ML who levels up in a game. More of the journey (both mental and in-game) of a top eSports player. Inspired by actual eSports players and discusses their struggles, games, and career. Writing Quality: Clear and understandable writing with minimal grammatical errors. Generally reread and edited at least twice before publishing. I personally pride myself on vivid descriptions of scenery and emotion and try to add small Easter eggs or foreshadowing, but it might read a bit wordier than most works of this genre.Stability of Updates: Pushing for an update at least once every two days. I am a current student, so please excuse me if I disappear for a few days. That being said, if you vote and comment, chances of me updating or even giving a mass release are very high :3Story Development: Will be a moderately paced story, roughly divided into four quarters that mirror the ML's place in life: 1. Casual Play 2. Rise of eSports 3. Height of eSports Career 4. Forced towards Retirement/New Commercialization Trends *A lot of the plot drivers will be personal growth, both career-wise and interpersonal relationship-wise, so do not head into this story expecting a straight leveling up story.*Character Design: Very realistic character designs, with each person complete with their own strengths and flaws. More importantly, there will be character growth and development. World Background: Realistic setting that mirrors the history of eSports. The game, Kings of Valor, is loosely based on popular MOBAs such as League of Legends, except with different names, champions, and champion skills. (And yes I play League a lot ;-; Tbh wayyy more than I should for my own good)Warnings: Not the typical videogame story that focused on the game itself or the somehow OP ML but instead centers around character development, gamers' relationships to family and friends, societal expectations, and choosing between dreams and reality. Disclaimer: All coincidences with real life names and events are not intentional and are not intended to offend anyone.Enjoy! To see if people actually read through these reviews...if you play League, attach a GIF of your main! Also, if you wanna support me through Ko-Fi for the new Diana Ultimate skin, I swear I'll update ;-;

i was just starting taking interest and it is now "Premium "......... I think author could have built his foundation of 50 or something chapters so others can explore more about mc and his life.....sigh~well w/ever, story has good plot but power levels could have been more simpler ....( like, esper, abilities , espgen, soul) .......i mean it 'could' have been .......anyways it's up to Author .....So as far as i have read, it's readable and  quite gun as mc is not stupid or sometimes he is stupid and sometimes he is smart....Lots can give it a try[ Warning : Author has used heavy Friendship force here... And there will be no betray like cliché ... ]

Hey erosire are you back from your hiatus ? If you are so when are you going to continue your stopped stories. Well, I haven't read it yet but if you are the I am damn sure this story is going to good I have confidence in you man.

It starts off pretty good but as it goes on the story just turns into a harem where 90% of it is about the MC sleeping with all her wives or going on dates with them or taking them out to fight monsters with him where he'll just end up sleeping with them. It's really annoying. I want more of her exploring dungeons/the world, conquering more land and getting stronger but it's just a slice of life harem.

Daniel felt extremely anger but didn't show it, he gritted his teeth while hanging a awkward smile on his lips.

The young man finally got inside and immediately waved his hand to the shop owner, which by the way is the father of the beautiful waitress. This man has a frightening appearance, scarred military men like face with a 2.5 meter height and boulder like muscles allover his body while wearing a very ripped and fitted clothes, scaring the hell out of the customers, making them think twice on making trouble for the beautiful waitress.

"This dream will end," he intoned, wincing as his nails seared into his flesh. Opening his eyes, he checked the navWatch again only to be greeted by the same date. Looking carefully, wasn't this navWatch an older model as well? He hadn't upgraded in a few years, however, Cliff could swear that his had been newer than this, there had been more scratches as well, from long nights of drinking alone.