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thank you author
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This was actually really terrible.....Very disappointed, it could've been executed a lot better...................
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Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Ah yes, isekai into the creator's own game.The grammar and characters have been fleshed out nicely. Your sentence structures are for the most part great! The breaking of the 4th wall is a nice twist and its not abused too which is good. The only problem I have is the plot. What's Jason and Mo Zuo's end goals? This is his game so he knows everything about it, but what is his purpose? This could very well be explained later, but I just recommend making it clear near the beginning chapters!
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it's intriguing and suspense driven. vivid in explanation also makes one glued to the screen  I love this peace so much. the author is great
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When I took the assessment, It was a little above the one minute mark before I couldn't last any longer which means I'm still only in the Core Consciousness stage…
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Are there going to be any more chapters
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Price – 10,000,000 DP
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Our soul—our mind, will and emotions—was designed to know and experience God's love.
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"No! No. Is just that. Um. Well. Damn it I'm sorry." I face palmed. "I don't know, it's my first time dating. And I am unprepared with a lot of things. I mean, I don't even know what the guy looks like. How can I even trust him to be with me."
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Soon thirty days had passed and only 2 people had managed to last the whole time, Luo Yin and An Tongyi! An Tongyi reached into his pouch to bring out one more pill but found out that all the pills had been exhausted. 'Oh no! If I stop now, my refined core will start to slowly dissipate and elder already said those are all the pills he has!' Soon the pain started spreading once more throughout his body, 'Argh, if only I had 5 more pills, I could easily enter the second stage! Right now I have almost finished refining my middle layer, and only the outer layer of my body remains!' Refining the core saw no major improvements in strength, albeit a larger stamina and endurance, but his physical strength would still remain the same. Once the middle layer had been refined, an explosive increase in strength could be seen, one could easily defeat 10 non cultivators in a  single breath, and once the outer layer had been refined, one would see a stronger defense and resistance, some who trained only their outer layer fully would find their skin could resist 20 strikes of a blade without receiving significant damage!
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[Han Fu has sent out a red packet!]

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