How the dungeon in Danmachi is different than I thought (DROPPED) - Reviews

J'apprécie énormément le contexte de l'histoire et le thème jamais vu ailleurs le héros est assez normal pour être fondamentalement coolDésolé pour l'anglais j'ai du mal

It was a little rushed in the beginning, but the  books settles down to a nice flow around chapter 6 or 7. The world building could be improved, but after the first 20 pages it’s a good novel.

It's pretty well written. But there are some things im not comfortable with. The inner monologue, for example, is written in pretense tense and can sometimes be distracting since there are no italics. Other than that it's pretty well written.

There was a farmer and a dog, B I N G O B I N G O There was a farmer and a dog, B I N G O B I N G O There was a farmer and a dog, B I N G O B I N G O. Yeah deserve one star

The start is admittedly a little slow however it does get better and the story is now moving at a better pace (currently on chapter 524). However each adventure the group goes on is interesting if there is one thing I will say is that in the first 50 or so chapters there are a couple of chapters of when it’s just the group grinding however when it gets into later into the chapters the fights become gradually better written and more satisfying overall story is currently 4.5 but the first 100 chapters is about a 3.75-4. So if u are in the first hundred chapters and u don’t have much else to read I would still recommend continuing as long as you like some parts of the story.

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"I want you to know that I didn't lie to you. I can use my smoke only once a day."

Reading this words and mission, Orichimaru eyes stared to shrink and cold sweat started to appear in his back. This was his plan for future development if his plan went haywire in konoha and now here it is the mission scroll given to him by the same person that even knew Hokage movement. This caused him to increase this Masked man rank in danger above the Hokage in his mind.

"So what will come out? A scam virus? A simple prank? Let see... Your claim has been accepted. The special console will arrive at your dorm in the XXX street by tomorrow Mr. Adam WHAT THE F THAT IS SCARY!"

He turned away, but not before the princess caught a glimpse of sorrow in his gaze. But like the sheltered life she had enjoyed up to that day, it vanished, burnt away by the fire reflected in the prince's eyes.

Davon: fine. * whispers to mac* I'll go in your room tonight

"Ye'er is always been careful not to provoked me unless she was up to something. .