House Of Omen: The Indomitable Smithersmith - Reviews

House Of Omen: The Indomitable Smithersmith
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Excelente novela ??? Ojalá el autor no termine rápido la historia mínimo unos 800-900 caos ????? Buena acción, romance, fantasía, Mc OP, R-18 ?, nada que envidiar de otras novelasssExp, Exppp, Expppppppppppp
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Too much Plot Armour!MC has a personality disorder (He doesn't think of consequences before taking his decisions, As for my remark, you'll know once you've read it completely.)Waste of a romance...(Seriously? Why is there a romance in this novel? He is a ruthless heaven-defying cultivator, and in my opinion, his heart is just too soft...)Again, Why does he act like a just and honorable person after killing so many? Does killing not affect his personality? And duh, I'm not talking about just one hundred or thousands...Romance sucks, his personality sucks, his way of turning down other women, who actually loves him a lot, disgusts me to no end...Overall, Plot flow and Quick arcs are good.
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finally a mc reacts properly when put into a fantasy world like this! I will continue to be a reader for a while (more words so i can post a review)
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soo hard to read.. it's all over the place.. concepts aren't really clear.. MC suddenly gets a sniper rifle and it's not clear how he got it.. some people are saying in comments that he went abroad n used his personal space to get it.. but there's no mention of it at all..One guy is killed in the game n when he's out he's driving his car all of a sudden.. and he immediately re-enters the game still driving.. how did he end up driving the car when he was in the game? or does the car detect he's in a game n drives itself?  nothing mentioned.. there's no time stop or something n user has to wear a vr helmet to play n all.. there's other stuff like mc walks into a gym to test this strength.. coach seeing his form is wrong corrects it.. seeing MC is strong he immediately asks if he wants to become a coach.. even though all he got is strength.. MC rejects it.. n that's it.. nothing else.. only reason I can imagine why the author wrote those 3-4 paras is to make fun of other novels where MC does join a gym which is kinda stupid..Real world is even more ambiguous.. MC enters the game at night n is out by morning.. what does he do during the daytime? go to work? go to college? nothing.. he eats meat from the game.. exercises.. re enters the game.. all I can get from this is that MC takes an entire day to eat n go for a run..MC goes to his village all of a sudden to defeat his friend/neighbour as he became stronger.. then that friend guards his house when MC is playing the game.. nothing else..Basically everything is all over the place.. written very poorly.. n half done.. upon that translation is really bad making it even harder to read.. overall it's simply unpleasant to read.. a complete waste of time
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I like the synopsis ..................................................,.............................................,...................................
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The harem cliches are gold. I'm dying every few chapters for different reasons. Its also not a simple level up book. The mc doesn't need magic to win against op people and I love that. Mass release... please...
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I found my way back to the road I already discovered. Richard told me I could find the first Type of Pokémon after crossing through the next city which lies north of here about 5 Kilometers (3,1 Miles) so that's my destination now.
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She can't hide her flushed face as she got the flowers. It was a pretty flower and she really liked the orchids because of their aunt and her mother whom they've considered as a grandmother.
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World is beautiful and lovely . All animals and human beings live here together,without any complaint and problem .But this time all one have problem from each other .All people want only profit ,no one thinks about nature and environment . Nobody think about animals also.
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Alot of the staff members noticed the commotion, but since they were all in on this. They just averted their gaze.
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I remembered the rooms I was locked in, so I made my way to those halls. I found a door that says storage on it, so opening it I was brought to tons of boxes. I groaned then quietly closed the door and then started looking around. Every box had names stickered on it. I found my name and quickly grabbed the box. I opened it and saw my clothes and the necklace TJ gave me, plus my rings I wear every day, and the ring my mom gave me. I quickly put my jewelry on and quickly changed my pants to the jeans that were in the box. I kept the green tank top on, the necklace hung right above my breasts. It was a long necklace okay ?
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"We now shall begin the examination." William said as he distributed a bunch of crystals throughout the field. "Put your hand in the crystal and depending on the amount of energy you have it will increase the crystal's brightness. This is a very simple test that we designed to know how much magical energy each of you have."

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