His Unwanted Girlfriend - Reviews

muah. I'm in love with this book. hehe

good for your past time

Wow!! I love this story...

cute love story

a good read...

grammar issues, the story is entertaining though...

the blurb needs more context if you want to attract more readers. another paragraph would do if you want to keep it mysterious.
the narration has a melancholic tone to it.
tense consistency is an issue, as well as the grammar. but with some editing, this will be even better. nice work

Loved the story

nice piece

I'm so in love with Manu here! Ugh, it's already pay to read but wait for me Manu  I'm gunna getchu!

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