The problem with the novel is that, you don't know when the settings/place/scene change.
Something like:
[Jaime smiled as he kiss the horse's *ss and began to prepare the spell.
In the throne of the blah blah kingdom, there was this skeleton with a big black dong... ]
Something like that. From my experience from other novels, there was supposed of atleast
'*****' when changing some scene so that readers won't be confuse.
