Highschool DxD: I have a Dimensional Travel System - Reviews

Great book....... finally completed with an amazing end....

the story goes too fast for my taste, like the MC who kisses his ex-girlfriend as soon as they meet (not enough development of their relationship in the new timeline). Not enough explanation on the length of time that the MC  play from the beginning, to be able to have a point of reference. But the theme of the story I love it since they look like legendary mechanic but from the point of view of a player. In addition you added a difficulty mode  which is new in my opinion or if it does not succeed their account is deleted.

It’s ok it kinda sucks tho. Jdjdjdhdjdjdhdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjhddhhdhjddddddhdhhffhfhfhfjdjbdbhdhdbdbdbfbdbfbdbdbdndndndndndndsorry for that I don’t know anything else to say lol

To be honest I'm not one to hate. but I swore I saw the same plot before on a different novel. it seems that there's been a couple changes to it though. very intriguing

Misleading title and genre tags, below average product.The writing quality is average at best - readable but with lots of mistakes.Updates are slow. Story is average at best, but too much Asian cliches of family love and care, too much of mutual respect and bond between high and low status people on the base of ... nothing. Main Character being overpowered is a common trope, but there should be a reason for it - even if a bad one, here is none.Characters are there, but feeling like cardboard target in a shooting range, it's not big deal if they were missing.The world is average compared to other novels, but lack building and explanation - basically - if you have read other MMOrpg novels, you should know it, which is a bad move in my opinion.Won't recommend, unless really bored or just wish to support the author.

too long of a build up, inconsistent grammar, MC has a weird mindset, odd s**ual assault bit added in, cliche after cliche. I don't know what I'm reading sometimes.

I WAITED TOO LONG FOR THIS!!! I remember reading this before... WAITED WAITED and was going to give up... I hope the updates are going to be quick... If i am not wrong the translators stopped because of a certain site... hmm... hmm........

i just wanna say that i would not continue working on this novel anymore.

Bruce was rather uncomfortable to found Hulk sleeping soundlessly in his mind, "why is he sleeping?".

Her father, Li Zui Hao almost laughed at her daughters ugly glare, " We are here, you need me to come up with you?

Bellona's expression gave Shirou a foreboding sensation.

Hinaya jumps on him and takes the lollipop while sitting on his chest. Ayden pushes her really soft and she falls on his legs. Ayden sit a little more straight and said:'You can ask it nice?' Hinaya sit on his lap and takes the lollipop.