Her Tamed Mafia King - Reviews

I have read the first 2/3 chapter and I liked it I hope there will be more chapter.?......................................................

This book is way too awesome to be alone.The interesting part starts from the start. A great story awaits you if you just read the first page.loved this book.The writing style is great and strong. liked the words and sentences construction.keep it up

t"Maglunch tayo sa restaurant ng girlfriend ni Mario. Remember him?"

Snow landed on her feet on the next rooftop, instantly missing the feeling of the wind all around her. She looked back to where Nate stood, smiling confidently  at him.

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

The plot is amazing, characters are well detailed enough to be visualized and i can't wait for more chapters to be uploaded to see the story unfold, also really want some fluff author but great work

"Ga usah, silahkan lanjutkan saja kangen-kangenannya".

Where is the author I’m waiting for updates…

The story has potential but spoilt by missing chapters, disjointed, jumpy storyline within same chapters, obvious grammar issues and my main peeve is the action part is written like a 3rd pov summary. I gave up reading after the escape as there are better books. Author needs to rewrite

MC is from the modern world and invents explosives.  When the cliche plot of evil rival family comes a knocking, instead of dealing a decisive blow with an explosive trap, he chooses to fight in a tournament that ultimately wouldn’t reverse the situation with the rival family. If the author wants modern elements in a story, he should stick to it rather than have it be a meaningless background for the MC.  Dropped.

the translation to English is rough. this novel would probably present well in the authors native language. unfortunately the character development and interaction between characters results in no development with the main character being overpowered with a domineering personality.

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