Hell King - Reviews

Author pls update soon I am eagerly waiting for the next update

chapter update so lateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

the story is decent. everything is good.until the mc became a Beta.I will not trash talk about this novel because everyone has their preferences, and I will respect your opinions.but just heads up for you brothers who hate beta mc.

Starts of with an interesting premise but sadly disappoints and fails to deliver.  The MC has little character development and is honestly quite boring. The main problem is the translation or the source material is badly written with many errors and Inconsistencies effectively ruining any sense of immersion you might have had.

I think it's pretty good. The one gripe I have is your comma splices and unending single sentences. I think using grammarly might help with that.

No depth. Should just start on another novel.

Amazing Novel Writing Quality is very Good Story Development is out Class  Good Story Development ?????????????????????????????????????

'They know each other?!' he thought as his hands trembled. That time he knew he was dead.

THE FUCKING CASE!

"Li shidi, don't mind it. This Shang Guan Hong's personality is rather arrogant." Gao Changtian comforted him.

"You know what I am taking about kim" he said with his piercing gaze on me, like he is daring me to lie.

Yoongi's point of view