Heiman - Reviews

i like this story

I really enjoyed this read so far especially the MC who gives me Hikigaya Hachiman vibes as well as his chemistry with Lilith. As a true believer in giving an author time to reflect on what they do instead of posting daily without having time to improve I like how this is a weekly which let's the author work on anything they may have trouble with which is awesome.Gambateyo Author-san

It's er gen's latest work and we all know how great of a writer he is! I was following the MTL before coming here and couldn't be happier that someone like Lordbluefire has picked it up. Hope u deliver another fantastic translation to us!Now, I kind of liked how it is translated as "Beyond Time" everywhere else. Also, the novel has a dedicated cover in the CN version, so why use this third-rate one? Finally, please update the summary of the novel.

At chapter 5, dropped, 3.8 stars from me.Although I can't say anything, I already read enough and this types of novels isn't enough to interest me.So for people, this novel is extremely similar to [ I am a superstar ] The world entertainment industry is extremely lacking behind, thus mc uses his knowledge to create LOL for example or popular novels such as [ Library of heaven's path ]Though with a luck cube of some sort.This must be enough info for y'all to not hate on for posting a review for only reading 5 chapters

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The writing quality is very vivid. The description and the world building is really good. The character development and design is the major aspect of this novel. I will definitely recommend this novel to anyone who is reading this review. However, you will carve for more chapters but won't get them soon. The update stability is a little lose here.

the mc is too timid , mentally unstable , stupid , and a coward he claimed he had and too prideful and dark

first impressions after reading the first  50 chapters. So far an interesting story about a man who 'accidentally' found a cultivation technique that allows him to live for a very long time. After a long time of cultivation and pushing earth technology to an higher from the shadows he is discovered by some powerful creatures who guide him to leave earth and go to a dimension where humans cultivate. He is 'guided' to join a sect and start his cultivation journey.I like that the story is told in a different way than the cultivation stories from Chinese writers (different pacing, different starting point and route towards the furst cultivation steps, etc) while still being a cultivation story. It gives the story a fresh feeling (starting as sci-fi and changing into cultivation in a way not seen very often). What I also like is that although the mc is starting out with the mc receiving all kinds of 'plot armor' and lucky encounters it is told in such a way that it is not just luck that will make the mc strong, he earns it with smart choices. And on this platform one of the best things I could say is that so far I haven't seen an 'idiotic young master' type of character (I hate those characters bc they often get themselves and their family killed for the dumbest of reasons. They are called cannon fodder for a reason but more often than not it doesn't do the image of the mc in the eyes of the reader much good. An antagonist who acts out of logical reasoning make the main character look better when he defeats them)Not everything is great but so far I have only found minor things and not things like where the story and character development breaks world building. Think of things like sound in space, small mistakes that are also often made in movies and animation. And another thing that sometimes can be better is the distinction between narrator and character. When is the narrator talking about the mc, when is the narrator talking in general. In other words small things that could often be fixed with a slight restructuring of some sentences or paragraphs.The story is interesting, plays out in an interesting world and told in an entertaining way. I hope it can hold this energy in later chapters too.

Nearing the end. Unsure of what will happen to mubai and xinghe. Will they live happily with their son linlin? Cant wait to read the next chapters. Please load them up soon. Thank you. Hahaha

I got on my scooter and rode to the Tim's dinner and continued down the block looking for the address. It really wasn't that hard to find.

Elsa:anak....ano bang sinasabi mo?

"I'm up.." Ashley said as she gets up from her bed and heads to the bathroom. Her mom then walks downstairs.