Heavenly Yaksha Naruto ? - Reviews

liking it so far.... can't wait for the ending.....

This book is really dumb, the MC gains the ability to just change people's choices on things but we don't actually get to see the choices. The book will talk about how "number 1 is bad and number 3 is the best option" but it never tells you what those options are so it's super frustrating to read

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No just No, when I read this it felt so bad to the point i would re-read the most boring book in the world than read this is he so dumb to the point where hes going to be a test subject or killed. I wouldnrsther trust a  5yr kid then him with a secret than thr MC,like who tells the family "oh im going to be really strong out of know where when I dont have no powers anx im really lazy , oh yes thats not wierd at all ok son thats good to know" like really in almost spit out my drink for reading that. *this is just an opinion also the total rating is 1/5

okay the main character's name I couldn't actually read that much kept changing every other paragraph between Jake and Leon. the HP made no sense he had zero for a couple system updates for a while and then had 10 out of 100. the exercise routine made zero sense but that wasn't the main issue at one point at the beginning he ran 5 mi in 3 hours that is so slow. I just the random writing errors were driving me nuts. admittedly it's not awful story there's some stuff that just doesn't make sense and add up well but it's not bad I'm just very frustrated.

Well this is everything i could ask from a novel. Actual mental struggles, believable motivations and fleshed out side characters. Absolute 10/10

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This novel is very nice,its Intersting,thrilling. The character's are very different and i loved the characters  I'm eagerly waiting for further novels

just the description gave me a stroke so that kinda explains how reading it goes. I hope it'll improve and get popular this cause its a got story premise.

Hello! Author of Diavazo Logs here.So I thought I'd give a more detailed overview of DiaL while avoiding spoilers.DiaL follows the two main characters, Nori and their AI partner, as they travel through Gaellia—a world that would soon become the battleground for a game where Winning meant Everything (and there is only one winner). Of course, Nori wants nothing to do with it even though they're a player. Diavazo Logs is a story of an AI pushing his reluctant partner to be a "hero," helped along by the fact Nori's "Luck" really is to be admired.TL;DR: DiaL is about a "not my business" protagonist that gets dragged into trouble and problems due to their righteous AI partner.I'm very glad the Inkstone publishing platform is finally rolled out since I've been waiting for months to share my titles here. I'm one of the very first authors trying out the platform so there are bugs but it's to be expected! (Root Ball Prison Cell is C15 and She Brought Me Cake is C16 instead of C2 or C3, respectively. Hopefully, that will be fixed soon though.)Oh, yeah, updates. Release rate will be 10/week—double on Friday, Saturday, and Sunday. I'll try to maintain a constant buffer as long as there is interest.

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