Hatsukoi Loss Time - Reviews

Right of the bat i wished that the stoy would be picked by another translator considering the hiaitus in regards to its new chapter releases.The story itself is simple enough as its about a guy from a science-centric world being transmigrated into a cultivation world. he has no special cheat ability to speak of and only equipped with knowledge of pop culture reference and the craftiness of a shrewd ***** jaded by what modern life brought.The world building itself is not concertrate on its lore and mysticm but more on the interaction of lu ming with his surrounding which is more reactive than passive.Character design wise , the mc does get the enough growth to stay ahead but not enough to make it distasteful. they are a lit of recurring characters which are given ample development but the antagonist tend to be short-lived since they’re no recurring ones to date

The author is quite had a good grasp on the story. Nice description of what is currently happening and I enjoyed reading! Best of luck author for the success of your novel! Have a good day!

The book is fire overall, and yall should give it a try,  solid prologue, and has Mega potential check out his other works to, Author has proper writing skills

Well  , I give you a very good rating because I think that there is great potential in your webnovel and that it hides a lot of things in my opinion... I should not be able to give such a good rating because there are not enough chapters but truly, if you continue like this I think I can say without fear that you will be able to keep this perfect note, we will see at the end of the 1st arc

With her teleportation sealed, Bennia can only withstand the barrage of magic coming from Riche until she retired from the game...

The sight of her clothes in that condition caused her knees to quake. Snippets of the evening floated in and out consciousness as she collapsed on the ground, staring numbly at the plastic bag in horror.

"It's alright Angela. No one will find her. My brother and I made sure of that."

" Alright, whew, that is at least one thing I don't have to worry about. Although, it is a little bit worrisome that I can see through my arm, and I'm... glowing?" Looking around at his surroundings he came to a sound judgement, " I seem to be the only thing in here, and Jesus is it dark. I think I'm literally the only light source, which is one of those statements I never thought I would ever have to say."  

I had never done that before but I was determined to satisfy her and do whatever she wanted me to. she groaned and pushed back, sinking me in to the hilt. She was so tight that I had to move slowly or we ended up just rocking back and forth but she slowly loosened up allowing me to fuck her faster. she lifted herself up and took my hands and put them on her tits and showed me how she liked to be fondled. I squeezed her tits, milking them down until I was pulling her nipples between my thumb and forefinger. At the same time she was rubbing her clit in circles and I was still slamming in and out of her ass. We were racing toward our mutual climax, she was moaning so loud I just knew we were going to get caught, but I didn't care. Pretty soon I could feel the cum welling up and getting ready to explode from my cock.

"But don't worry too much master, after all as a side effect of your wish, your chakra already unlocked and ready to be trained."

We are humans after all, what could possibly go wrong?

At the time of this review, there are only 31 chapters. From what has been released so far, I can say a great idea and story. Now with only 30+ chapters there's not been a super ton of plot development. However, what has happened is detailed, thought out, interesting, and enjoyable. The characters are diverse, and realistic. The author is blending sci-fi, fantasy(my opinion), dystopian, supernatural, and cultivation into a piece of art. The only flaw I can see at this time is that the Levels or Ranks are not full defined yet. We get a general view but it is still unclear at this time. I expect as the story progresses that this aspect will become clear, but at this point it is still muddy. This is something that might bother new readers coming into this story. Having said that, it really doesn't matter this early in the story because of everything else that is happening. TRY. If you do anything else just try the story. If you give it a chance you'll find yourself emersed into a captivating world. You have nothing to lose by trying. This author is a incredible story teller that will suck you in and not let go. This is purely my opinion. Try and decide for yourself if it is worth it or not. Thanks for giving us this gift of a story.