Harry Potter em Changed Prophecy. -- Livro 01 -- (Version English) - Reviews

Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

look what I found, someone's trying to plagiarize this.

but what a good novel, I like the development of the story, it does not advance neither slow nor fast, it advances at a normal pace, you look like a professional writer, how many levels will there be, will there be 1000 levels? every 100 levels is like a kingdom and when you reach level 1000 you will become a god? the MC will evolve from a skeleton to a zombie, then to a ghoul, then to a goblin, then to an ogre, then to a minor demon, then to a greater demon and then to a supreme demon that has a human appearance and is hermono and has long hair and is it man?

I'm very satisfied with the overall story. The pair is chaotic and the interaction is good. Applaud. I really love every bit of it. it's nice and simple. Easy to read. Keep it up, author-nim. ???

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

I see a lot of potential here just after reading the first couple chapters. The unique way the dialogue is written is very attention grabbing. It's not what most authors do, and I think its an excellent style that is very similar to movie scripts which really helps push your imagination. I hope the author will continue leaning into that!The world is also VERY interesting and EXTREMELY unique, but in my opinion more time needs to be spent easing us into it. Its very jarring to go from one idea or concept to another with so little time in between. As a reader I like more time to invest in an interesting concept and having so many interesting concepts thrown at me one right after the other is very overwhelming.

I was hooked from the first chapter. The characters are relating and the writing is top notch. kudos author. Looking forward for more

There's always a way

"Yes Jie." Both of us laughed happily. "Hahahahaha--" Our laughter stopped because a bunch of Good Boy gang boy blocked us on the road.

"Anthony .. kau !!"

A cackle broke through the air, giving Harry a fright. A witch jumped into the space in front of the houses. She was carrying a cage. In that cage was Spike!

Looking at Yi Zheng's confidence, his parents agreed to let him fight in the family tournament held in a few months