HEIR Unexpected Love - Reviews

thanks for letting me to read your novel I really appreciate it... it's really good novel and I love it.........

A wonderful story, worth the coins. The intense cliff hangers were keep you craving more. Highly recommended!

What’s going on? Diana is a woman or man? How can she be mistaken for her brother Daniel? Even with a photo they can’t differentiate between a male and female?? Can’t be the male lead and his men are that stupid?!? Author, isn’t this a bit far-fetched?

OMG!!! Just with the argument I'm freaking our. I thinke I may have a heart attack.These two have a complicated path

From which religion

The grammar is pure cancer.
Illegible.
Half words are left and stuck together.
Example:
He finished. After...
Is written as:
He finishfter.
Not to mention the author uses no pronouns.
Literally uses the mc's name 9/10 sentence.

Example:
Yassine looked in horor. He thought this was a spirit. What should he do?
Is written as:
Yassine looked in horror. Yassine thought this was a spirit. What should Yassine do?

For everything. Everything.
Does it get better? Its pure brain damage.

This is mtled i wouldnt read it. It’s practically another language.

nice one...........................

wonderful story

love this story more please

Great read

The plot was going okay but near the middle/end there were a lot of inconsistencies in the story. None of the characters other than Sybil and Ken, and the ML's mom are very likeable. The ending feels rushed.