This is actually a really good story, and I have enjoyed it so far. The story is fun and pretty well written. But it’s called Summoner System and the MC hasn’t summoned anything. it’s a monster tamer system. It’s like calling Ash from Pokémon a summoner. Just kind of disappointing.
AMAZING READ..I love the way this novel goes although a little exaggerated and boring from time to time.. it's a pretty good read..anyone knows the RAW
Interesting story and do your best to improve grammar, if this is first time writing basically always poor at grammar but it can be improved and make sure the plot getting interesting for next
You are doing god's work, it is so much better without all the racism and nationism, and China is racist af but that's a norm for them, and in western there are racist but everyone is so sensitive to it that you can't even make a joke, things like culture appropriation dominant but it is a joke, and woke people are just... sigh..... and too many movement that separate us instead of uniting us.thank you for your work.
I shamelessly give a review to myself. :)I plan to divide the story into two main stages.1) Apocalypse in MC original world.2) Calamity in Gondola dimension.Synopsis:After living on Gondola for fifty years, Chen Murong dies under the craw of Lucifer, one of emperor rank demons from the undead race. However, at the moment of his last breath, he activates one of his time magic spells with his most precious space gemstone. Through the spell, he wakes up alive, back in his hometown, and returns to the year before the apocalypse period began. Writing Quality: It is at least better than I thought it would be. I do fight for improvement. Please help me edit it if you have some ideas. :)Stability of Updates: I have both full-time and part-time jobs. I will try to update as frequently as possible.Story Development: The events in the past life of MC will continuously reveal little by little throughout the story.Character Design: I promise that there will be several key characters in the story.World Background: Mixing between modern and fantasy.
I really liked the stoy and the world set up, the story itself is compelling. It is more interesting than the novels in which the MC has to escape/fight his relatives from his mother's/ father's side. Of course there are few cheats like he is good at everything like alchemy, blacksmith and arrays.Overall the MC' s character is fell flushed out, in the begining he is innocent and naive but that changes as the the story continues. The fighting is good.I would like to see more politics and betrayal in the story.I like MC' s MOM she is badass, powerfull but she is also gentle and warm towards her family. I think the author should focus a little more on his mom.CAN anyone tell me when will the next chapter be released?
"Good job, Gao Feng. Put them in the kitchen sink and go find those idiots. Our new boss should be coming soon. I want everyone here to meet him." she ordered before patting the dragon golem on the head. Such a nice soft fur was too irresistible to not pet.
"I hope we can clear this misunderstanding today, Hyun-Shik," Ji-Eun said with a sad smile. "I don't want to fight with you. I don't want our loved ones fighting among themselves. We just have to grin and bear with everything for a little while."
There was pressure all over the room for several of minuets then a new pressure began when we hear the sound of the bombs near us,I shivered when I heard it.
