Guia - Reviews

author of super gene , lol aint gonna even bother . sg was total waste of my useless time and can probably guess how this will turn out with kind of **** synopsis

every value is messed up, names are changed, chapter 9 is the 8th one. low quality in every way, dont loose your time if you are not trully desesperate to read something.

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Great stuff, light read, I dont really understand the complains that is generic or similar to budhas palm novel. Who cares. I really liked budhas palm sign In and seeing the idea developed in a different way is great.

The writing is decent, the updates seem consistent, story development is alright and there are decent characters. The world building also seems OK. Honestly if you like some what JP-anime vibe story then give it ago. There is nothing that seems wrong, but the character of the MC and the side characters were rather annoying often. Plus the whole thing about everyone keeping things from him isn't my cup of tea and him not remembering things after major events. Plus the whole chapter of talking to himself about how he will not do something only for him to that exact thing at the end was annoying as well along with half of his self talk. All in all, if you are a fan of the genre give it a read and decide for yourself, it has its upsides, it wasn't my cup of tea, but it could be yours.

It is a good story with some cliche parts, like every fantasy story, but it feels like there are many unnecessary parts and some conversations that are forced or unnecessary or dragged out.Overall I like the story and the slow development, but the conversations between characters doesn't feel smooth for me (don´t know how to describe it), but I will stick around and see how it turns out!Good luck!

Exceptional, indeed. Loved the deviation of the norm, fascinating. Strong vocabulary and an impressive writing style. Hoping to catch up with the latest chapters. Great job!

I have to drop a star for this one.The update is way too slow only 3 chapters a week...i like reading new novels and form what have i seen so far(im not sort of expert) the stories that has fast release gets more attention than the slow ones so i hope the author increase the rate and not just add bonus when place in ranking cause readers only tend to vote when there is a chapter uploaded.although im one of the few people who vote for this everyday im having doubts to continue supporting coz theres a lot of interesting original stories with fast release.that all....

"We found out your past," he says looking to see if I react but when I don't he continues, "We found a secret lab filled with dead, decaying bodies all around. There were also documents of all the experiments performed. One of the experiments was on children from destroyed villages. We found records of your home village including the confirmed death of your family. It is unknown who was in charge of this facility, but they killed countless people and powerful shinobi. We are currently hunting down the members, but until they are captured we need you to disguise your identity, you will be picked up by one of the Hokage's trusted members to train you."

when I was walking home  the wind started to blow harder  as I looked up from my phone my eyes widen as  I saw what it  looked like a vortex  

"It is a tricky and risky procedure for both of you," he said in a serious tone. "Lia, needs to recuperate and gather her strength first before she took her surgery" he clarifies.

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