Enjoying what you right is the most imporpent! The enjoyment of the readers comes after that. I loved the story, and pretty much gessd its most likly not going to go far, but thenks for saying it outright and not just dissapiring or agonizing yourself over a novel you dont enjoy, witch tend to end up with novels with good start and terrble end. I would love to see a new novel one made by you for your own fun only, but thats up 2 you :)Remmber most ppl who post negative comments only mean they like it but want it diffrent. They still like it else they would stop reading!
