Graves - Reviews

So having read past chapter 80 I feel fully confident in giving my review.  This book is not enjoyable to read, and the reason why is somewhat hard to spot.  The biggest flaw is that I, as a reader, actively want Kael to die.  He is a whiny, crybaby who got what he deserved.  He says that he suddenly has trust for women again after his mom had stepped out on his dad...but why?  He trusts two women, one of whom had a child with another man.  None of the reasoning seems to hold together very well.  The dark elements are done really well, but they don't seem to ever be in the forefront.The universe itself is fairly decent, a good story could definitely grow from these basic story roots, but it never does.  While it is possible that Kael eventual grows a set of testicles, I find that very unlikely.  Even if he does, these 80 chapters are not salvageable.

I really like this one! please, pick up this novel. I'm hooked. It's my first time writing for some novel being picked up. please!!!!! ????? Generally, I always find novels with similar plots, so they become boring for me. But this one is different. Finally something refreshing ?❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

He's back disgusting little obedient grandson with no semblance of a connection too the modern world. He has no ambition, and pledges his life to this random master of his like a real c!nt pushover. He doesn't deserve a system. Dropping.This mc isn't worth reading about.

It's dropped, right? Well it was a good readHopefully the author comes ..........................................................................................................................................

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"Nah," Jack said yawning. "No point in doing it. They can handle it. They're mostly goofing off at this point." He said. Indeed he was correct as neither one of them bothered to use Mantra or throw an attack. Instead, they just dodged an attack at the last second. "The things a total small fry. Maybe high F-Class at most. A normal person could fight it without much trouble as long as they didn't get hit. I mean they couldn't kill it since you would still need Mantra but anyone of you guys could do it easily." Jack shook his head slightly. "Honestly this is a bit boring."

Marine - Hold it state your business why are you in this base???

I need to get myself away from this place

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

Should the Moore law hold for a century more; some 150 years

Miles is so cute omg, he reminds me of my younger brother I just want to give him the biggest hug!!!!! AND RONAN THAT LITTLE BABY I JUST WANT TO SQUEEZE HIM!!!!!

Good book loved the story development as well as writing quality