Friendship - Reviews

The writing and editing started out strong in the first 20 chapters or so, after that the writing quality dropped by quite a bit. The MC is a fairly solid of slightly boring character, he doesn't show the typical arrogance of an OP character at all; at the same time, he doesn't seem to have much personality beyond him being hardworking. So far there is very little detail as to the state of the city MC lives in, let alone the greater world. It wasn't until mid-20s I believe that it was said the wilderness was even an issue for these superhumans.

I actually liked this novel, but as of today the last update was 1 month ago. Shame.I'm glad this happened before I had to use SS.Maybe the author will finish it soon. Who knows.

Good one                                                                                                                                                                                             

The writer seemed to have put a lot of thought in worldbuilding, as well as how to implement them into the writing. there are many small details that explained the world while the story is moving on, without over-saturating the plot with narration, which in my personal opinion is the correct way to explain the world...though i'll admit that the writing  is not perfect, it still able to draw in the readers' attention to the plot

Love the story so far. Fan Zhong just wants to live with little white. The guy must be posting somewhere else to have a backlog.Needs more commas lol

He didn't manage to obtain a close look as Yijun turned. The fair-haired boy drew his shirt across his shoulders calmly, all the while watching the other boy. Chen lifted his eyes to meet his gaze. It was difficult given everything, but he knew better than to dwell on it. He opened his mouth to inquire about the tattoo but found that the words wouldn't leave his mouth.

''Help me, Mommy!'' Sage screamed as her magic slowly stretched towards her mother, ''I can't control it!'' Big, fat tears streamed down her face. Ana struggled to sit up, wincing as a wave of pain hit her. This would count as the third time the barrier restricting Sage's magic broke. She was becoming too powerful, much too powerful for a six-year old. Ana had no choice, she would have to use a much stronger barrier to restrict Sage's magic. Unfortunately, that would require much more magic, way more than what she had. Although the limits her magic could stretch were impressive, she would need someone's assistance to carry out the task. Ana grimaced, as much as she didn't like him, she only knew one person who could help her now - Sage's father.

Boss, you have meeting with Mr. Sy after here. And you have contract signing this afternoon. This weekend you are invited with Mr and Mrs Anderson's party.

Auria looks slightly less confused but starts to understand it a bit better as she asks the librarian

The students stood within the city wall, prepared for the coming battle. All of them wore battle armor supplied by the military. Due to their special identities, the army gave us the best quality equipment.

"I'm not working for Falcone. I can't tell you everything, but I'm getting information for a friend in the DA."

Alena looked at me seriously and said " is it true Chris you know you always hide your problems so as not to be a burden to others"