For Ourselves - Reviews

Wt...... Is this novel in marvel or dc universe?ufeff? Happy Birthday!?????????????????????????????????????????????????

MC spent 3 years of his life as an unsuccessful blacksmith. He had done nothing notable aside from that.Basically, he had been living like a non-entity in those 3 years. There was a girl that was in love with him for no reason, other than her having spent some time with him.Things only came ‘alive’ after he awakened his cheat; suddenly the girl decided to be intimate with him, suddenly some mook started finding trouble with him, suddenly there were assassins targeting him.His personality is bland. It was mentioned that he transmigrated, but he did not have the maturity and unique mindset of a person from Earth. His transmigration is probably just a set up for the existence of his cheat, nothing would really change in the plot even if he’s a native.As for the plot, most of the time he’s forging weapons, and when he’s not forging, he’s fighting, or some characters would bother him...no problem with that, but it would get boring later because the MC has no other feature that could make him attractive to readers, aside from his cheat perhaps.You can just treat this like a generic xianxia novel, be it the plot pattern or the MC's personality, just in a western setting.

Not bad for a story with only 5 chapters. managed to get me perfectly hooked. I don't think i've read a better first 5 chapters in any other books.Keep going Author. Good Luck

I like the novel, something that bothers me is the mc's personality but I think it will change with the passing of the chapters, I just hope it doesn't take too long.

even though it looks completed it is not and he’s also still charging coins for something that is not completed and currently paused on production to do another book what are you could’ve just continued the bookies currently writing

This novel is great! It’s not an apocalyptic system novel that’ll put you to sleep haha..updates are reallyyyy slow so just spam the author???we will win‼️ anyways I still have stability of updates a 5 since its stable...at like one a month??

Reviewer here. Reading status ch 53 currently.The story is great and it really highlights a part of the isekai genre rarely discussed.Discrimination and the fact that it's not THAT easy to adapt in a new world, especially if the God that sent you to that new world didn't give you beyond broken cheat skills.This novel has dark themes and easily highlights the reality of a planet inhabited by a multitude of races; all with their own goals and agendas.On a side note. If you're a preacher for human supremacy, the type that hails humans as beings only beneath God but above all others, this is not a novel for you.

It's very good it feels like reading a novel by a professional author the beginning of the story has some LMS vibes you describe characters action and reaction very well  dialogues don't feel expository characters feel real enough and the world is well established even though even though crippled sister is staple of many novels and animes (ex: code geass) you executed it very well . You should raise stakes I feel to get it more popular if you kept at it I feel this will be so popular.

Pros: The quality of the writing is superb.Characters are relatively well thought out and have personalityWorld is pretty good, couple things are a bit strange but that may be due to a slow build up.Cons:Story is all over the place, a lot of missing information that would make some parts easier to keep together.The Update Stability is what makes this book hard to stay excited for; 2 chapters a week isn’t uncommon for amateur writers. One problem is the chapters are a little short.But the BIGGEST issue is the cost of reading, specifically the Privilege Access. 700+ coins for 9 chapters is not a fair price. Privilege lasts a month, approximately 8 chapters a month for 700+ coins is not worth the money readers will have to pay.I am able to pay that amount, (and I DO, I honestly enjoy this novel) but for an average reader I would not recommend doing so.

" It has been a long time since I felt so relaxed..." Ting Mei chuckled as she observed Heng Huan's cold face stiffen a bit.

Turns out he thought that I'm only a highschooler. So there's no way a highschooler would be good.

The other spear-user, Mace, was to the contrary. He was to focus on earth element, with slow, steady flow that moves large amount of qi at once. This technique would also strengthen the capacity of his meridian at the same time.