Fluttering Clouds, Dawning Sky - Reviews

To be honest ,I had high hopes according to the synopsis , that's it's going to be a good novel, but the sword qi doesn't make sense the actor is to weak despite the amount of sword qi he consumed plus he's dying .I thought he was going to improve at chap 150 but it's still the same.

I love this story! It is like a typical Xianxia, but with a few twists to make it more enjoyable for a western audience. It has far less filler, with chapter 82 correlating to around chapter 400 in a typical Xianxia, and the world seems relatively well thought out, it is clear that there are more details about the world that aren't being told to avoid an overly large info dump, but it doesn't feel like the Author ever pulls things out of his ass. There are a few downsides typical to web novels, the grammar is pretty good but not professional quality by any means, and the characters aren't really well fleshed out (still better than a typical web novel).Ultimately I would recommend this story to anyone who likes Xianxia stories, as it feels like a well-executed no-fluff Xianxia with a western twist.

Well, the sypnosis this time isnt that bad, it tells you what the goal and the begin is.So basically a little lolita came before the mc telling him he is the descendant of a devil/demon lord of the underworld. The devil lord was betrayed and killed leaving only two inheritences left for the mc.The little lolita (If you count it as one)Weird device (Mechanics from a game mixed with the reincarnation law)Because the little lolita is weak she really can't do anything combat related, but she was a genius that helped the devil lord with making the weird device.Due mc's opinions they decided to make the weird device into a virtual reality game. (Basically SAO without the life risking sh*t)Thus players join the game obvlious that they are in the underworld. They slay mobs for something called *soul coins* that could be used to buy weapons that were made with soul coins by the lolita.5 soul coins production cost = 1 weaponShop: weapon = 10 soul coins.With that the mc gathers a lot of soul coins to built a lot of things in the underworld. (They also use the players to explore sort of?)Translation Quality: Nothing to complain about.-Stability of Updates: Well...... Probably it's okay but for now.. GUYS VOTE FOR IT!-Story development: It's interesting, the new things they keep adding kept it interesting. Such as a war, mansion and other things, plus the interaction of players is also fun to read.-Character design: They are well made, let's hold it on that.-World Background: Isn't much. Because the author focusses on the underworld and real world, while also the video game, the world background isn't really to see because how much the author wants to hide it.But, I still give 5 stars because the author did a pretty good job on the other things. I mean, you need to focus on the game, real life world and underworld.I'm not mad at that.

Unique story, however, early romance ruins it. Doesn't even have the romance tag. Also don't like childish mcs, when they're actually adults.

should be a 4 star but the unfinished characters made me drop a great read.. after a month of not fixing it I consider it on purpose so *<[( EPIC FAILURE )]>*..... bye bye

She checked the eggs, which were done on one side. The key to avoiding crispy eggs was to flip them easy over right after the egg white solid turns from clear to white throughout the whole egg. She flipped them over and fried them on their top half for about a minute or two before using a spatula to transfer them to the bottom muffin-halves.

We entered the restaurant at the same time the Yaoyorozu family entered the other entrance. Mom already informed me that the Yaoyorozu family have a daughter which is about the same age as me but she looks just like me, more developed than our actual age. She is beautiful and if I had not known I think she looks like about 4 years older than her actual age, even where a woman should be developing already shows its signs in her. As we near each other mom greets them and hinted me to greet them too.

"Yeah, i have their phone number. I'll contact them to clear things up."

This was Ria. A strong hearted and loyal woman whom he had never seen in such a state before. Although she always tried to bottle up her feelings, Ryker was usually able to see through her facade. So although it wasn't the first time he had seen her emotions being laid out in the open, things were different this time. Rather then attempting to hold her thoughts in like normal, she was instead letter her feelings flood out without any regard.

"ga gabisa, ga akan pernah ada yg bisa ngengantiin ibu di hidupku selama nya, dalan sebuah teori yang aku pelajari di kampus.. ketika seseorang menjalin hubungan baru dengan seseorang yang baru, maka putuslah hubungan sesorang itu dengan seseorang yang lama atau masa lalu nya. Jadi ketika ayah memilih untuk menjalin hubungan yang baru dengan perempuan ini, maka ayah telah memutuskan hubungan ayah dengan aku! Sekarang aku Tanya sama ayah, ayah pilih aku atau perempuan ini? Jawab aku ayah!." Tanya ku pada ayah sambil menahan tangis.

Yan Du flicked his sleeve again, and a blood poison with a strong foul odor blew out into the clouds.

He is sitting in his bed accompanied by loneliness.He is mumbling to himself "if I knew I would love you this much, I wouldn't let you go. I failed to cherish you.you are my deepest regret in my whole life.The time I spent with you is the only time when I feel alive.where are you Sally. I think am gonna lost my mind.I miss you so much.you are the only one in my heart"