Flawsome - Reviews

Wonderful work author. keep it up

Yes I always like pay for some half-a..ed MTL translationFirst 40 chapters are good then recently translated chapters are MTL and you need to pay to unlock :) greed at its finest

which I do not like from this novel is the main cast is very stupid !which I do not like from this novel is the main cast is very stupid !which I do not like from this novel is the main cast is very stupid !which I do not like from this novel is the main cast is very stupid !which I do not like from this novel is the main cast is very stupid !which I do not like from this novel is the main cast is very stupid !which I do not like from this novel is the main cast is very stupid !which I do not like from this novel is the main cast is very stupid !which I do not like from this novel is the main cast is very stupid !

Hey guys! This is the Author with a brand new story. As this is a WPC entry, this story was never premeditated so bear with the story.The story focuses on the main character's journey towards self-discovery. He is an NPC that suddenly gained sentience without the need for an AI. And of course, he's immortal and brings a chicken with him, cuz why not?

A unique and nice novel, the grammar is good, couldn't find any mistakes. The story is developing in a satisfactory phase, which is not too slow or not too fast, keeping readers like me engaged. The sci-fi plot is amazing, I liked the mc, and the other side characters introduced till now. I will be rooting for the novel!

First of all props for putting your story out there takes hard work to do that. now saying that , the story feels like it needs some major editing and proof reading. some of the sentences just dont make sense  so wilr i say cheers for your work and story ideas, ima bow out on reading more of this. salute

leo looked at the interaction between the family and smiled at the close relationship they have and that he was a part of the happy family.

[Please handle this, Boss…]

"Phoenix?"

"Where are you from Henri?" Damien followed up this with a soul jerking question.

"Kisuke," Ichigo said in a sweet friendly voice. "Run," he said chillingly as his face turned cold.

Miyako is puzzled because of my suddenly started story