I love the story line and the character development. It’s a very enticing read, I’m curious as to how it ends. If you’re ever looking for help editing I would love to chip in!
What does he mean he'll close things up? I've been standing to the side of this little exchange until now, with the same kind of passive acceptance that I'd have in a dream, but losing an entire day's worth of pay is enough to wake me up.
