Cont from last comment. I think the book has great potential but the style of the writing needs to be cleaned up a lot to make it more flowing and easier to read.
I m currently on chapter 9 I like the overall plot of the story so far. I am having difficulty reading it, not sure if the authors first language is English as it almost seems as though the way some of it is written is how someone would translate from their language to English. See next comment
I know i can mostly likely trust your opinions with such a fire name - Do you have any other novels similar to Chronicles of Primordial Wars, specifically novels that have that tribal period even if its just temporary lmao it's really hard to find ANY
