Fantasia Online Afterlife - Reviews

Good job by our dear mate. Keep writing , keep progressing. We are always there for you.Do more and more progress. Detailed things are here , easy to make films through details?. We need to find the secret to end the darkness of the world. Not only in the novel there is both good energy and dark energy which are around us . We need to identify them not for gaining power but to protect and improve the lives of everyone. Nice start by our dear mate. All the best to you.lots of love Dear Rajib.

Never read anything with such a low level of grammar and spelling. Here is a quote from chapter one: "All of us scared, I? of course im scared since im a 40 Years Old man."=> Wow ... all of me is scared, I.

do bees have the mmmm thing on their heads like ants? if so if our mc ever transforms into human formcan e have something like this .....

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Really enjoyable novel! Arcs weren’t to long or over complicated and romance was just right as well :)

What the Fortune Teller said did not appear good to the king's liking. He drew up his sword and pointed to him. "How dare you insult your king? Are you not afraid for your life?"

"Ehhh! Sumama ka na! Nako matutuwa yun pag nagpunta ka." masaya niyang sabi.

"Yes. It should be an investigation quest with a rank-D adventurer as the minimum requirements."

"You'll do that to your own father, mother and sister?"

So Ryota decided to keep his promise and got one of his friends to make him a Sword. When Yuuichi got it, Ryota told him to name it and Yuuichi named it "Courage" because when he first picked up the sword, he felt Courage and he wanted that Courage because he knows he's scared of bunch of stuff but he hopes this Sword can give him Courage.

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Rating myself, yes because I can. I know the requirements of review length is 150 characters. So I am writing lol and lol. Is this much enough?