Falling to where I belong - Reviews

Not bad, but there were several things that I didn’t like such as the psychological development of the MC that was quite poorly executed, but still the world development was really good.

+Good comedy+Good concepts+OP MC-The items favor the plot too much-Slow story progression-disappointing and silly plot later on, author pulled out racism card later on tye path of dominating the world, not even politically.

If your dream job is to be the fry guy at McDonalds then this novel is for you!   Not trying to be too negative but I would like to point out that if your going to write a novel like this then at least teach some real-world values with some realism.Like the translators pointed out, the writer makes tons of plot holes.The quality isn't bad at first but then you get too much unnecessary dialogue later on which makes it boring to read and you guessed it, there isn't much action.

Pretty incredible work here, especially for something so early in. I primarily have nothing but praise for this novel, I mean, I binge read it faster than I do most else. But really this story has had such an incredible progression, the writing quality feels top notch (for the site), and it just feels like this is the start of something great.My main positives:I love the pace here, MC progresses fast, maybe a tad too fast at times, but never too slowOnly 230 chapters in and the scope of this world already feels so vast, and if it’s properly explored, will be incredible (SERIOUS props to author on this).Cool enemy and game design and great setup for many future plot lines.Those are the just the huge positives but there is dozens more, now here’ just the most minor of qualms:Slightly concerned about introduction of unused characters, some of them are awesome,but many feel as though they’l serve a purpose and never be seen againMC hasn’t a ton, but I do suppose this can be excused considering there’s quite literally a trait on his soul dedicated to seeking his revenge :P.Anyway, short for time on this review but INCREDIBLE job, can’ wait to see where this goes!

Great start, a bit generic but we come to this genre for this so it's okay, I like the baby start better but can't have everything. I think I'll have a good time with this one

He then put the Ring on his index finger and noted that a warmth had passed on his finger.

"No! It was me who was selfish! I didn't want all your hard work to go to waste!" Charlotte interrupted.

"I just packed up for leaving home, wait let me check and say whether its possible" Jason replied.

"Umm.. So.. Do you accept me as your sworn sister?" Song Hye Kyo asked hesitantly.

He started working as a pizza delivery boy after his father died, although he faced some problems while doing that work but seeing the hard work, the shop owner never kicked him out.

"Aku sudah berhasil, aku akan pulang dan kembali pada keluargaku. Terima kasih, kalian sudah mengajarkan banyak hal padaku selama empat setengah tahun betapa pentingnya kehidupanku. Maaf, aku membalas kebaikan kalian dengan membunuh." gerutunya di balik bayangannya yang tersorot lampu kecil.

"Depende." Maikling sagot ko. Dahil sa naging tanong niya, naalala ko na naman tuloy ang nangyari kanina.