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Author does an amazing job of building a world, it's like reading a fascinating history book of an unknown world. doesn't waste time giving you the meat and potatoes of information and sets the scene for the world immediately.

It has great potential... I cant wait for more chapters to be released. It can be a Gem and compete with top novels if the development is done well.

C17Please make the MC smarter and more mature, or at least polite. I know he was a bigshot, but its irritating he keep cutting off someone else dialogue. he is exactly a muscle head just like how he describe his first disciple survivor. Other than this only problem, the whole story is very interesting.

Honestly I do like the story but with so many grammar errors it just feels like cancer trying to read this novel, I have been trying to not drop the novel because it is different from other novels but I wish that the grammar will improve.

Kushina looked at minato with fear in her eyes she knew how jincurikchi were treated and she knows how people will treat him for being the the kyuubi jincuriki

"Most of my hunts are successful," she counters, controlling her pride so she doesn't give Cameron another reason to want to wrap her own whip around her neck.

I love this novel. Give it a read it’s a little different from the usual romance tropes on here and it’s refreshing

Nana <3I love this author's work from the other site, I never expected she will upload a new novel to this site!The story has been fantastic so far. There is character development, moral issues, family issues, and a plot that is much bigger than you may have initially thought.I could know at least that much from her previous work, so you must check this one out!