Most of the time, you'll feel like you're in the middle of someone else's conversation without a real beginning. Writing is hard to follow since it jumps around from scene to scene without logical connections or context clues quite a bit. MC will be complaining or explaining something to himself in his head directly at the reader in a 4th wall break while scenes with unidentified speakers play out in the background before pausing his rant and looking at something taking place in front of him and start describing it. Translation seems janky in the strangest places like they took a literal meaning for a Korean euphemism instead of using an equivalent analogy. You'll get kicked out of any sense of immersion every few hundred words since it's confusing as to where they are in the world, timeline of the story, or characters within the scene at any given moment.
