Evelyn's New Drink - RTW Fan Fiction - Reviews

It's very good story but the world background or what's has happened in Li's past is covering only half of has actually happened, but overall the story was entertaining for me to read

I wasnt a fan of fantasy and video games novel, but after being referred to this author's other novel, ive started following his work. Grammar is just perfect and the details of the action scenes are well described. Keep up the good work author. ???????

This novel is very intriguing enough to be recommended in webnovel. I love your novel writing pace, skills and knowledge you are really a brilliant author.??

Me: reading the description Me: sees level 999Me: that’s what I like ????? It over  140 characters Not really it not but now it is over 9000

Its the standard cultivation novel time of review is 20 chapters. face slap is a big thing. He was transmigrated from earth with a black stone that lets him cultivate better and the power system is normal with then celestial genes that gove you super powers . Its okay not great readable pacing is okay albeit a bit fast at times. Couple translation errors also his servants want to kill him

I’m giving you a fiver off the rip because there are not enough good mecha novels and mecha is what I love followed by magi-tech(and technomancery) I’ve honestly had this sitting in my library for awhile now  and now let’s dig into the world you have created I’ll post a reply to this if i find anything that needs asked or worked on .

I'm having a really hard time to tell if this is bad or good here's what I have to say I like  the starting point of the MC its original for the starting point and the system isn't to overpower to start off I also like that he's introducing modern things for trade eventually here's what I don't like story reads a little more like a military log with some Flair it does not have much character development it's more of MC goes to point A dose  things then goes to point B does things sometimes goes back to point A there's our only real three instances that I can think of that have some character development but for the most part it doesn't exploring characters including the MC I think it would be a very good story if it got Rewritten a little and started to explore and go in depth of the characters and make you invest in them

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The ornament was a life size glass fist. The detail was exquisite, including several glass coins clasped in the glass hand. It looked like some horrible totem of greed, but the smiling merchant took it happily.

- That wasn't so hard eh, was it. Go and sit in the corner!

Wasted potential!Take me out of this state I'm inGo somewhere I've never beenGot something trapped insideStill alive, where's that paradise?I thought by now I'd findRough justice is a long lifelineBack and forth between the desert and the seaWho I was and I will always beOh yeah, woo hooToo bad, woo hooSo sad, woo hooGet me out of this state I'm inWhen I spiral down, it's a vile spinGot something I can't hideStill alive, it's an overwhelming driveTo prevail and get out of this jailDust in my eyes and a tear in my sailBack and forth between the desert and the seaWho I was and I will always beOh yeah, woo hooToo bad, woo hooSo sad, woo hooTake me out 'cause I'm all aloneHair undone, despair unknownGot something trapped insideStill alive, it's a momentary rideI've been on a thousand years too longA thousand years too late for everything that's wrongBack and forth between the desert and the seaWho I was and I will always beOh yeah, woo hooToo bad, woo hooSo sad, woo hooOh yeah, woo hooOh yeah, woo hooOh yeah, woo hoo

"Benarkah? Termasuk diriku?" Yoona hanya tersenyum. Pria itu, Sehun terlihat terdiam ketika melihat senyumannya. Pria itu merasakan kehangatan dari senyuman itu. "nande? Kenapa kau hanya diam?"