Esyr, the First Fae Dragon - Reviews

Okay ,I read the prologue and it's something which i wanted to read, simplicity on your writing is best , looking forward to read the whole book in one go......

Very interesting and captivating book...️...️

Two things i notice authors on this website struggle to execute in their novels are Systems and Harems. So i find out that mc had a system, i had doubts about the this novel, cuz usually systems can either break or make a novel. I love how the system makes the mc work for everything and doesn't explain everything, leaving him to figuring it himself in a satisfying way. The author really excel in action scenes, it's trilling to read those chapters. I also like how there's a little slice of life chapters in the novel, if that makes sense.  This novel is the few reasons why i regularly come back to this website.

Disappointing. Waste of time.14 chapters and I didn't see any differences with the original.Misleading synopsis. 1 star to everything except "stability of updates" which get 4 stars for the string of uploads.

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Worst Mc every seen . Even lin fan from strongest system know when to stop , but this MC has worst personality . No charisma . No usage of brain . And by seeing Mc , he seems to be 3rd rate bully/waste of a person in his past life

The book’s only drawback is the poor rate of releasing chapters.  Who want to wait indefintely for a chapter.  If i had known that only half of the chapters would be released i would not have begun Reading it.

Shameless request, but whatever. Please don’t turn this into a harem where the mc surprises all the bad guys and wins the hearts of all the maidens. I don’t want to see another story with potential become a harem novel that can only repeat the same thing over and over.

I hate the MC. He is the king of retards and it is really frustrating to read this.I like the idea of the novel but the author ruined it with such a stupid, moronic and retarded MC

*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism: I suggest keeping the lengths of your chapters from 1k-2k words each due to that being what's most liked on this site, though the story isn't lacking in my mind, I feel that the first 5 chapters are likely a bit on the short side. Also, for the last two chapters you have gaps of time that you did not explain to us that you would have ahead of time, this will reduce your score in stability of updates, I suggest you try to keep updates more regular, or to let us know what we should expect as far as when new updates will occur. Positive feedback: You had stable updates for all but the last two chapters, and you did well in all other arias of this novel... keep up the good work.;,;.Personal Feedback: I will continue to read this novel at a later date.;,;.Score: WQ&SoU 4/5 SD,CD,&WB 5/5

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