Enticement - Reviews

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Whoever is paying the editor is getting ripped off. The translation is basically unga-bunga speech. Includes flaws such as: jumbled sentences, repeats, missing words, autocorrected words, incorrect homophones, wrong words, abrupt periods, and bad grammar galore.

The plot is good though. Just need to sacrifice a few braincells to the elder gods to enjoy it. ?

The book is good. However, it's way too long. this could have been broken up into three or more books. I stopped reading after the Sydney and Mark story. The mix-up of names throughout the story got confusing, and then it went right into Aiden and his girlfriends story.

It would be great if conclusion was good.

Great book all the way through!!