Really excellent story so far. Beginning is a heart-wrenching twist that creates a brilliant setup for resolution. Grammar has some issues but the writing is still far better than most books on GoodNovel. Writer struggles with telling rather than showing in active voice but that takes practice.
It's great, once you're through the first 200 abusive chapters. Still harsh thenafter, but less repetitive. Annoying how it's dragging for so long, but still gripping.
