You are a great writer. I couldn't stop the tears while reading the final chapters. I'm going straight on to book three. I have to know what happens next. Will she get any sort of happy ending with the one she loves?
The plot is decent but it is very difficult to read. It contains a lot of repetitiveness and excessive nonsense. I’m giving up after 16 chapters. It definitely needs a revision.
Peyton lugs I’m so in love with your books please keep the chapters coming, i know your a busy women, but I’m hook to your books. I’m reading three of them at one time. And they are wonderful
