Elf Inflation - Reviews

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How are people enjoying this? The MC is very ignorant, the pacing is exceedingly slow and the lack of world background is unbelievable. I find it sad how real world corporations were also used...Lazy from my point of view.

Same old handsome mc and fattty bestfriend and ofc same old one dimensional third rate villian and face slapping no need to waste your time on this trash

Once a long time ago, a beautiful women, with large bouncy features, that liked to call herself king because she earned it after killing all her brothers, King Yama, decided to expand the universe in order to make a game for phantoms in the underworld! After a long time of testing this new expanded universe, she said screw it and tossed some unlucky phantoms into that universe where even ghosts could make babies! What will happen in this new expanded universe?Find out in the next episode of random author's note!

Dont really know what to say except its a good book i hope there will be more if not that really sucks i was enjoying it a lot and that would be a really bad place to end it on chapter 26

Really good and creative. I love the writing style and language used in ch 1. Although the world building could use some work as I feel it’s more telling rather than showing (a good balance between the two still needs to be established), the story is fun and full of adventure

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-Sea- 'Nope'

- You are safe now. It'll be fine- He says as he stares at me.

'Syukurlah, tidak lama lagi akan ada ujian kelulusan, Aku akan memberikan nilai tinggi untuknya, agar ia bisa segera keluar dari sekolah ini.'

"Well, when he founds out that this James Moore, is who his daughter is infatuated with, if he has a decent background he could be a contender to court you." There went my heart beating faster than the horse pulling our carriage. "Do you really think father will at least give him a chance?" I looked at him with my noteworthy puppy dog eyes. "Er, I'm sure if you went to him with that face and told him your case, he would keep it in mind." I grinned, "Kingsley, I want to see him again. As soon as possible, when is the next time I'm free?"

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