动物王国(english version) - Reviews

Interesting read, author. Very interesting read. The characters are nicely written and bring the book to life.The plot is even written nicely so that you are waiting and wanting for another chapter.Good job and keep up the good work.

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Worth the Read! Slow start but is picking up speed. As an author myself, I can see the building and placement for the future of the story. Like the MC, the author is building a foundation for a long Webnovel. I hope to see more chapters and more speedy updates!

i dont care,even if it stolen..but pls continue to update,i love this story..kcyixoyrsrysyorzzuflxhlfzylrsylrslutsup+_l[zyyo%yrgsl6r<64l_%%ul:gjlshjtllsor=al64oa36olgsky+zyk%6k%gsl6l6o4lglya6o%yrpzuptxugzptuar6s7ridpkyxyorzyorzyora6os6o4syrpxipcyid7tciyibud5stodyi

I came to read it, as an event was going on, to get free FPs, but I stayed for the plot.?The author got me hooked for this story.? I really can't wait to read more of it.?u200d↕️ Please upload new chapters. ??Everyone, do give it a try! It's really very interesting. I'm sure you'll all love it.?So far, soooo goooood?

Average 20% each for 72 rabbits seems to be a good amount of experience per monster if I have to say. But there seems to be a problem because each of us gets a different amount; So it's either they divided by participation or there's another way to get experience other than fighting monsters; The question is what.

To his surprise, Asami offered to help wash his hair. Of course, the blond should have seen it coming a mile away when washing took a different turn. Bath turned out to be yet another tiring workout session, not that Akihito minded.

Thinking like this, she dropped her phone and picked up her guitar that she hides inside her own cabinet. She started cleaning it and test the tune so that she'll know if she needs to change anything or there are any problems while playing it. After she confirmed that there was no problem, she started using it.

I must have slipped into my thoughts for to long, since currently they where saying their vows.

He passed the end of the meadow by a few more lers (m) just to be safe, before he decided to turn. However the silhouette had now become clear as it was really close, a figure covered in a half heavy armor and a sword inside its sheath on its hand, it had almost reached the end of the meadow. As it noticed the shepherd looking at it, it began waving one hand and calling again "DAYA FURA". The shepherd was pale, the orc for last time had not chased him like this, it had only warned him, and yet he had gone inside the meadow again. "I AM SORRY MASTER GHOST, PLEASE I SWEAR TO YOU, I WONT GO INSIDE THE MEADOW AGAIN" the shepherd had kneeled down and was on the verge of tears, the figure was at the end of the meadow and then it stopped.

Slimes were still alive and roaming the world in great quantities, while ancient vampires had died out.

Judo: 50