《Ephemera: Love Letters from the Vanished Hour》 - Reviews

It looks good to read. But it is too long   I hate reading over 200 chapters  the stories just keeps going circles.

Writing review as of chapter 462. Decent novel better than the majority in this app but plagued with pacing issues. Story premise is interesting with higher dimensions and historical rifts. However, dimensions basically just become power levels and not much variety with rifts(would explain but don’t want to give spoilers). Author sets up for large character development by making the MC infuriatingly naive. Love story just feels forced so isn’t impactful but more like filler. Pacing becomes an issue with explanations taking majority of a chapter often with rhetorical questions that could be answered within actual story elements allowing reader to make conclusions instead of treating them like children who need everything explained. Action is good and character development is well done but as stated before character starts almost drop worthy. Will continue to read

Cringe 0%Generic 0%Wholesome 99.99%LOL 99.99%Potential to be a good story: 99.99%(This should be the new review system)I definitely liked the story very much. I liked the MC, his optimistic personality and his way of life.Luck, the main theme, seems to be working in mysterious ways.

It's been a long while since I've read a story on webnovel that can actually grab your attention, enthrall you with its characters, and make you believe in a world of fantasy. This is story is a gem. Author should be very proud

Honeslty I like the concept but the mc's senior brother who is the sect leader flat out ruins the novel for me. Such an incredibly forced character. To say he's bad at pill refining is an understatement but the author has created him as a character who childishly and stubbornly refuses to accept that fact, and instead of actual effort/development, it becomes a meme that trashes the novel. The sheer obliviousness to his own failure makes it an absolute joke.

Cmon man please start writing again. I literally can’t read other novels cause their quality feels subpar now. I’m addicted and favourite drug dealer isn’t selling me my drugs. I need your product. Come back...

I don't know who you are. I don't know what you want. If you are looking for readers, I can tell you I don't have many friends to share this with, but what I do have are a very particular set of skills. Skills I have acquired over a very long career. Skills that make me a nightmare for people like you. If you continue the story through the end and have a satisfying ending, that'll be the end of it. I will not look for you, I will not pursue you, but if you EVER drop this, I will look for you... I will find you... and I will.... lock you in my basement until you continue writing :p

I really like the idea behind the novel, it has the potential to be a really interesting and fun one. With the exception of a few grammar errors, the novel is quite good :D

I’m pretty impressed. I think this is the most well-written of all the contest entries along with the top two in #73.Your characters emotions are done convincingly enough, and the settings are clear and sketched out better than most. I also appreciate that you’re updating consistently with a good length per chapter.Along with decent writing/grammar, I think update quality is the next most important in any story but especially for contests. I don’t know if the 10k words requirement to rank is being held in place anymore with stories having much less than that (like 1-3 chapter stories) getting ranked in top 10, but I hope it still is. It doesn’t look like that, but I like supporting the dark horses, so I wish you the best of luck. Hope you continue the story! (:

Esse livro é muito interessanteJá fazia um tempo que eu buscava um livro que o protagonista fosse um deus tentando retomar seu trono ..................         ......... ..........................     ........

Its good stroy and its all...........................................................................................................................................................................

Your story is really nice. That is I give you five stars. Author keep writing your story everyday. I hope you will do your best. Thank you......