I'd like to remind that this is entirely my own opinion and only based upon everything up to chapter 23. (Since there wasn't more out yet.)Writing Quality:It's noticeable that the writer has some experience. There are barely any grammar mistakes, atleast as far as I can tell. Which isn't very much, so take it with a grain of salt.Story Development:Story pacing is also very good. No boring places, only constant thrill. Not to say it's just action, but it's always interesting.Character Design:The characters are all distinct, with their own motivation and development. I like particularly that they are distinguishable alone from the way they talk. Very impressive.The main character is relatable and his choices are understandable. He changes upon his own mistakes and learns from them.Update stability:What's to say? The writer does still write, so good. I guess...World Background:Very interesting world, no unnecessary info dumps. It flows naturally into the story.Summary:Very good. I'm genuinely excited for more. There's no real point above, so I mention it here. The self aware humor is top notch.I wish I could write that good.
