This is my first reading of a litrpg novel, but I can say this novel is promising. Narrated in the first-person perspective of the main character.But what needs to be regretted is punctuation that is often forgotten.I began to confuse the narrator or the main character's thoughts.But overall is a good story so far, update more chappy and the reader will be happy!
Leroux didn't take long to reveal himself. From behind the heavy armored soldiers he roared and punched one of them in the back, throwing him all the way till he crashed against the building with riflemen, once more creating another cloud of dust. As they divised the attack was coming from behind them, the pointed their shields towards Leroux and made their swords fall down against him, showing discipline and experience. One of them was dead, but the emotions were supressed and actions were taken against the enemy.
Lucmar left the inn and looked intently into the darkness. " there you are…the last one. Let's end this." Lucmar flashed forward, without a single witness, and made his way to seal the fate of his kind.
"so what... let it be, if he angry i will call him pervert and i do it because he try to tease you, i bet half of boys on our shool will help us hehehehehe" Anni naughty giggle and imagine the boy helpless face, in other hand Anna only can face palm herself, her sister Anni is really trouble maker to begin with, its badluck for the boy
