Dragon Ball: A Saiyan's Journey Begins From A Dream - Reviews

Its deviated from the original idea. What originally should have been about a fallen immortal running a wine store has instead morphed into a story where the wine store aspect has been sidelined in favour of ‘sect building’. Like what the **** author? I came here to read about what was written in the synopsis not some bullshit xianxia novel where the protagonist builds a sect with the system aspect only being there to give him quick powerups.An example being how the system missions were previously all about making wine and the betterment of the store deviating and becoming some random bullshit like “Explore the Fallen Immortals Cave where there are items useful for your cultivation!”Summary: Used to be a unique novel that stayed true to its synopse only to regress into a typical xianxia novel where the protagonist unwittingly collects a harem and the system is relegated into being an object that serves no other purpose other than to be the source for the protagonists miraculous powerups.

I cant believe its finished I loved the book it was amazing and Full of excitment, I loved the characters,Well done on completeing you book

Another great story. Webnovel pick this book! It may have elements already done but it is quick to read and very funny! The MC is likable but at times shameful! He is not overpowered to a certain extent, and actually has to plan things out!

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Interesting story that i have found about farming, so far it have a fresh plot and settings. I love how the author portrays the characters especially the MC. I hope author can update more chapters daily probably 2 chapters or more.

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Really interesting story. I like how its starting and im really looking forward to see whats next. If i were to complain about something it will probably be the lack of capital letters but its not that big of a deal. All in all i love it, keep writing!

update fast and soon and never drop it everyone choice is different that's it

Once it happened I had to move to a different hiding spot. "Jesus !! My leg !" he yells while I hear him patting it out. "How the hell?" Another guy said and he started walking around, his boots came around the corner and his eyes landed on me. "Shit." I jumped up and pressed my hand against his face, causing a fire. I kicked him out the way and went to the other guys. They all pointed their guns at me which just resulted me in making a wall of fire between us. "Shit." I mumbled more to myself.

It's a cool place and they say it gets colder

God put it there, which shows, God has covered our ugliness with holiness.

A great book, wonderfully written, absolutely intriguing. Love the way the characters are given a proper personality and the way the story progresses. Hope you keep updating like you always do.. Hope to read a lot more in this book... I have really high expectations for thia