Doves, and Wisteria's - Reviews

Typical WuxiaBut formatting makes it completely unreadable for cultured people like myself. No paragraph structuring at all, just barbaric.Anyways MC wakes up in a dudes body and gains a system that tells him the success rates of things, like his chances of breaking through, or fucking someone.Typical, typical, typical.Anyways, he instantly finds some OP scripture that only he could cultivate because the system told him that he could, and coincidentally he becomes the student/lover of a lady that was searching for someone that could cultivate that scripture (wow shock)Nothing impressive, the formatting makes me nauseous

This book is a Gem can't wait for more chapters! Thumbs up to the author of this idea/creation ?? Good luck!PS: The Council of Men Approves.

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Shortly after his fight with Naruto, Orochimaru  went to one of the hideouts he had kept in the Hidden Leaf Village. He entered a dark room and sat down on a chair after switching on the lights.

-Mid-Horizon is on a different island than the main land where the City is.

Edward looks at Alan as if he is looking at a wounded beast roaring, his hands unconsciously trembling, and his lips quivering  before stopping after a while. He then heartlessly gives the gesture to signal the attack.

Su Lin shook her head. She didn't have any. Wasn't only one allowed? "Just one?" she inquired, wanting to make sure. Bai glared at her.

I'm wearing a long sleeve white fitted dress na hanggang tuhod ko with a flower crown on my head. Naglagay pa ako ng konting make up and lipstick to cover up my pamumutla.

All that glitters is gold

I encourage you to continue writing. You have a strong start. I think it is beautiful. It is my favorite type. Continue.?️????I am waiting for more from you???????

Writing quality is a 5 apart from the occasional typo or little mistake. The story develops at a good enough rate, giving it a 5. Though I feel the characters are too empty, with not enough personality, which gives it a 3. Updates are stable, 5 for that. World background is alright, though again feels a bit empty due to having only a bit of info, which earns it a 4. Overall, a gem in the dust, I recommend.

Everything thing about this book is just amazing the Romance and the story line I recommend this novel to you it worth you time you wouldn't regret it I promise