Douluo; Zhongli Adventures in Mortal World with Paimon - Reviews

it's a good novel except for the fact that it's a little slow paced.

I find the pace slow other then that evil neutral mc a very nice background and the mc is sometimes dumb but other times smart but its still 30 chps so i cant say much.

The quality of writing although not the best it makes it up with daily updates. The story although not too deep and unique (as of chapter 9) we have a goal and a basic idea of the world [ better than an average webnovel ]. All said and done I’d say it has great potential and is slowly moving towards its peak.

Loving the story so far.. and the readable writing quality. No MTL or unreadable english. Hoping you don't drop it. Would love to see how this story continues to develop, love the OP MC vibe.

Fantastic SCP/LotM type with more Slice of Life op MC added in

Bad dream?

hey author, how do I get to your discord.in the description, the link is expired. ??? plz resend send it here or somewhere.??

age:10 maybe

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Then, may monthsary pla yang mga ganan! So celebrate naman pero kapos kasi stujante dba allowance lang di pa naman uso nun unli txt at call (ay yung edad shocks) then yun so meaning sa school at pag may lakad tropa dun may time to hug hug and usap usap. Whahahha.

PFIOU

its nice to read  a celebrity theme i like it